those deemed to be most destructive were odd people, those without drive, those allow personal problems into the workplace, and those with an
unpleasant temperament or personality in general
古怪的人、没动力的人、将个人问题带入工作场所的人,与那些总的来讲性情或性格不佳的人被觉得是最具备破坏性的。
本句中:从给的翻译来看,those without drive, those allow personal problems ……,是并列关系,在整个句子是主语从句?全部放到是为了后面平衡句子?
感觉这种句子听起来很不适,是不是有类似的句子举例说明?谢谢!
those【主语】 deemed to be most destructive 【修饰主语后置定语】were【系动词】 odd people【表语】,
those without drive【并列代词短语1; 结构:代词+介词短语】
, those allowing personal problems into the workplace【并列代词短语2:结构:代词+目前分词短语】
, and those with an unpleasant temperament or personality in general【并列代词短语3 结构:代词+介词短语】
备注:第2个并列结构中的“those allow” 要改为“allow+目前分词allowing”
备注:以下是4个并列短语,公用后面were odd people系表结构
【1】those deemed to be most destructive
【意思:被觉得最具备破坏力的那些人。】
【2】those without drive
【意思:没动力的那些人。】
【3】those allowing personal problems into the workplace
【意思:允许把个人问题带入工作场所的那些人。】
【4】those with an unpleasant temperament or personality in general
【意思:总的来讲性情或者性格不佳的那些人。】
还原后为下面句子结构,即4个并列“代词those”作主语,黑体字为4个并列those的4个后置定语。Those deemed to be most destructive , those without drive, those allowing personal problems into the workplace,
and those with an unpleasant temperament or personality in general were odd people.
参考译文:被觉得最具备破坏力的那些人,没动力的那些人,允许把个人问题带入工作场所的那些人与总的来讲性情或者性格不佳的那些人都是非常奇怪/古怪的人。
Those deemed to be most destructive , those without drive , those allowing personal problems into the workplace , and those with an unpleasant temperament or personality in general //【主语】were //【系动词】//odd people【表语】
以上解答,仅供参考。